Welcome home….NOT. SFFS for August 11, 2012

I got such a great response for my little spitfire Estrella last week, I wanted to give another slice of her life again. Not only has she discovered, in last week’s snippet, that the Khimeyr are back, but this week she discovers that the commander is not who she thinks at all. Her world is in serious WTF mode, and she needs to take action. But what?

ESTRELLA returned to her base, flying blindly, jumping at every shadow. Gus reported the withdrawal of the Khimeyr from Dragonfleet space leaving the main Dragonfleet missile launcher destroyed, but that wasn’t what tore at her gut. She hadn’t anticipated them. She, who had always been one jump ahead of everyone else.

She was in a rare state of anxiety by the time she came in to land the Talon. Catava and Qiao, conspiring against her, her former comrades-in-arms, traitors, traitors…

She pulled up at the last minute, swerving into an alternate vector, flying past the boundaries of her base, punching up one land map after another onto her glowing monitor, scanning until she found it. There. She launched a barrage of laser fire at a building on the ground, utterly destroying the remains of the house where Catava’s father had raised his family. If she wanted it back now, she could have it—in molecules.

I have to hand it to her, the woman knows how to get things done. On the other hand, it’s not always great to run a government on impulse, and pretty soon it’s going to catch up with her.

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Posted on August 10, 2012, in book, science fiction, writing and tagged , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 5 Comments.

  1. Definitely not someone you want to cross…

  2. Somehow I feel her POV is rather unreliable. At least her views of anyone else!

  3. Yeah I cannot imagine why someone would turn traitor against a stand-up gal like that…

  4. Yet she actually accomplishes more than the others–in both positive and negative directions….

  5. I love this look at your character. I’ve always loved “unreliable” narrators, because I think that’s something that is true to life that isn’t often explored. To some degree, we’re all unreliable since our POV is skewed by so much including our opinions and experiences. That is to say, I really liked this snippet. You conveyed the wtf frantic mood so well. Great.

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